【批改英文作文&缩减至300字DearPaula,hi,howaboutyouAreyoubusytobeahorrorstorywriterIhavereadyourletterbeforeandIamhappyaboutyouareaskingmetohelpyoudescribeyourhorrorstorysetting.Ithinkmyschoolisagood】

　　批改英文作文&缩减至300字

　　DearPaula,

　　hi,howaboutyouAreyoubusytobeahorrorstorywriterIhavereadyourletterbeforeandIamhappyaboutyouareaskingmetohelpyoudescribeyourhorrorstorysetting.Ithinkmyschoolisagoodplacetobeahorrorstorysence.

　　Myschoolissuitabletobeahorrorstorysence.Itisbecausewhenmyschoolisturnoffallthelightatnight,itisveryscareandgloomy.IhaveheardsomeonesaythatourschoolhavemanyrealhorrorstoryWhenIheardit,Iwasveryafraid.Somyschoolwouldbeagoodsettingforyourhorrorstory.

　　ononeside,ourschoolsurroundingareahavesometress.Oneofthetresshasaropethatishanging.Itissaidagirlhadhangedinthattress,sinceshewascrossedinlove.Somechildrensawthegirlletdownwitharopeatnightandalsousuallyhearthepiercingsounds.

　　ontheotherside,ourschoolhashappenedahomicidecaseaboutateacherwhowasMr.Haihadmentaldisord.Hekilledstudentsafterschool.Then,hewassuicide.

　　Asweallknowthat,thiswaspostedinthemajornewspapers.Theclassroomwasrejectusing.Ithinkthisclassroomisabsolutelygloomy,emptyanddusty.Somegossipsaidthewallhadbeenseepageredliquid.Andnobodyknowthatwhatisit!

　　Myschooltoiletisveryscare,itisbecausethetoiletisverywearandthelightisverydim.Ihave

　　heardaterriblestoryfromschooltoilet.Itaboutagirlgototoiletduringalesson.Duringthegirl

　　goingtoilet,sheheardasoundwassinging,butthetoiletwasnopeople.Thenshescreamedandranaway

　　Coclusion,myschoolhasalotsofscaryplacesandstorybutIthinkthesetwoisthemosthorrible.Ihopeyoucanusemyschoolforyourstorybecausemyschoolisverysuitable.hopethissuggestioncanhelpyou.

　　Love,

　　Chris