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  麻烦检查一下是否有语法错误AhappypartyOneday,alltheanimalswantedtohaveapartyintheforest.Theyshouldpreparesomefruitsfortheparty,buttheyhadtopickupsomefruitsbythemselves.Thelittlepigdidn’twanttoworkfor

  麻烦检查一下是否有语法错误

  Ahappyparty

  Oneday,alltheanimalswantedtohaveapartyintheforest.Theyshouldpreparesomefruitsfortheparty,buttheyhadtopickupsomefruitsbythemselves.Thelittlepigdidn’twanttoworkforothers,sohesaid,“Iamtired,Iwillgohome.”Buthehidhimselftopicksomefruitstoeat.

  Theotheranimalsdidn’tbotherhim.Thegiraffeistall.Hecanpickupcoconutsandpeaches.Thelittlemonkeycanclimbthetree.Hesaid,“Icanpickupthebananas,andthey’reverynice.”Healsohelpedthegiraffetopickupthepeaches.Thesquirrelscarriedsomeapples.Therabbitspickedupsomeredstrawberries.Thebearsaid,“Iamstrong,soIcancarrythebigwatermelons.”Andthelittlebirdsfliedandpickedupsomegrapes.

  Theyhelpedeachother,andtheyhadsomanyfruits.Thelittlepigsaw,healsowantedtoeat,buthewastooshytogototheparty.Herealizedhismistakes.Atlast,hesaidsorrytohisfriends.

  Thepigandhisfriendsenjoyedthemselvesattheparty.Theyareveryhappy.

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2020-01-1821:03
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杜艳平

  最后一句,theyareveryhappy中的are应该改为were.因为短文是在讲述过去发生的一件事,而且文中也一直用的都是过去时.

2020-01-18 21:07:35
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