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【我写的.怕错了挨批.呼救啊.SunYang,awell-knownChineseswimmer.Hewasbornin1991inZhejiang.Hebegantolearnswimmingwhenhewaseight.Andattheageoffifteen,heswamforhisnationalteam.In2012,hewinthe400metersswimming.Brok】
我写的.怕错了挨批.呼救啊.
SunYang,awell-knownChineseswimmer.Hewasbornin1991inZhejiang.Hebegantolearnswimmingwhenhewaseight.Andattheageoffifteen,heswamforhisnationalteam.In2012,hewinthe400metersswimming.Broketheworldrecordinthe1500metersswim.
请认真看下啊大虾们.最好能说出错在哪里,哪里需要改进.
