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　　英语小短文一篇,帮着改改Todayisapril26th,onthe9:30am,agirlandherfriendweretalkingandrideing,whenacarcomefromthem,thenthecarhitthebike,thegirl'slegandheadwerehurt.Someonecalledthepolice,whenthepolicecome,

　　英语小短文一篇,帮着改改

　　Todayisapril26th,onthe9:30am,agirlandherfriendweretalkingandrideing,whenacarcomefromthem,thenthecarhitthebike,thegirl'slegandheadwerehurt.Someonecalledthepolice,whenthepolicecome,hetouldthedriver"Revokeyou'sdrivinglicenceorgowithhertohospital."then,thedriverdrivehiscarescorthertohospital.Ithinkshewillbehealther.

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　　TodayisApril26th.At9:30am,agirlandherfriendweretalkingandridingwhenacarcamefromthem.Thenthecarhitthebike,thegirl'slegandheadwerehurt.Someonecalledthepolice.Whenthepolicecame,hetoldthedriver,"Revokeyourdrivinglicenceandgotothehospitalwithher."Then,thedriverdrovehertothehospital.Ithoughtshewouldbehealthier.

　　这篇作文中的几大问题：通篇时态不一致,应都用过去式；从句中主从事态呼应；句子的符号；介词的运用；有几句中式英文翻译法.上文是修改后的文章,你在看看把