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  【初中英语口试演讲稿,帮忙检查下有没有什么错误~AnunforgettableweekendIhadanunforgettableweekendlastmonth.ThatSaturdaywasChristmasDay.Lois,George,HalieandIdecidedtogooutoftheschoolandcelebratetheChristmasDay】

  初中英语口试演讲稿,帮忙检查下有没有什么错误~

  Anunforgettableweekend

  Ihadanunforgettableweekendlastmonth.

  ThatSaturdaywasChristmasDay.Lois,George,HalieandIdecidedtogooutoftheschoolandcelebratetheChristmasDay.

  Atabout8:00am,wegotaridetoKFCandhadabreakfast.Thefoodwasdelicious.Thenwewenttoamovie.Themovieiscalled“TheOrphanofZhao”Itwasaboutahistoricalstory,andweallthoughtthismoviewasverytouching.Afterthat,wehadalunch.

  Intheafternoon,wetookataxitotheWestLake.MaybebecauseoftheChristmasDay,manythingsweremoreexpensivethanusual.Weenjoyedthesceneryinasmallboatandthenwalkedalongthelakeside.

  Finally,wereturnedbybusatabout6:30pm.Attheendoftheday,wesaidMerryChristmastotheskyandeveryone.

  Itwasthefirsttimethatwegooutoftheschoolandhavefunbyourself.Althoughitwasnotveryperfectandwefacedmanyproblems.Thatweekendwasstilloneofthemostunforgettableweekendinmymemory.

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2020-01-1615:26
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马连博

  第三行TheChristmasDay.gooutofschool.

  第七行thought改为said更合适.

  第八行应该是onaboat.

  最后一段还是gooutofschool.ourselves.后面oneofthemost后加复数.

  不一定完整,

2020-01-16 15:28:16
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