【雅思大作文求批改,语法什么的,随意指正吧.哎.快考了.纠结啊.社会（平均寿命）Topic:Surveyshowsthatinmanycountriesacrossthepeoplearelivinglongerbutincreasedlifeexpectancyhasmanyimplicationsfortheagingi】

　　雅思大作文求批改,语法什么的,随意指正吧.哎.快考了.纠结啊.

　　社会（平均寿命）

　　Topic:Surveyshowsthatinmanycountriesacrossthepeoplearelivinglongerbutincreasedlifeexpectancyhasmanyimplicationsfortheagingindividualsandforsocietyasawhole.whatarethepossibleeffectoflongerlivingforindividualsandsociety?

　　Thepastfewdecadeshavewitnessedadramaticincreaseinhumanlifespan,whichcanbedirectlyattributedtomedicaladvances,increasinglevelsofeducationandeconomicprosperity.Inthisessay,Iintendtoexploresomepossibleeffectsofrisingaveragelifespan.

　　Fistofall,itisanundeniablefactthatlongerlifeisinthebestinterestofindividuals.Regardlessofsomepsychologicaloreconomicproblems,whichoccasionallyseenamongoldpeoplewhostayalonewithoutchildrenorlackofessentialsourceofincomes,mostofushavebenefitedgreatlyfromthistrend.Specifically,totheoldpeoplethemselves,theyhavemoretimetopursuittheirideals,aswellasaccompanytheirfamilies.Meanwhile,tothechildren,theyhavemoreenergytostudyandwork,therebycontributingtosociety,forthesakeofwellbeingofthoseoldpeopleintheirfamily.However,aslongerlifewecanhave,itseemsthat,heavierburdenwehavetotake.

　　Ontheotherhand,thisinescapabletrendalsogiverisetotheproblemofpopulationaginginthewholesociety.Aagingsocietyisasocietylackoflabourforce,wichwouldleadtoaseriesofsevereconsequencesanddiscouragethedevelopmentofhumanity.Moreover,inordertoassistantpublicpeopleandreducingtheirfinancialburden,governmenthavetoallocatealargeamountofmoney,anditisthisfundthatcouldoriginallyusedinmoreessentialareas,suchaseducation,resourceandenergycrisis.Accordingpopularnewssources,thelargestproportionoffinancialchargeInthemostofyearofUnitedStateshasbeenoccupiedbythepensionexpenditure,whichwasdefensespendingtraditionally.

　　Inconclusion,thisisclearlyaproblemofsuchcomplexitythatnodirectsolutionislikelyinshortterm.However,Iamconvincedthatthemajorsolutiontotheproblemlieswiththeeconomicdevelopmentofsociety.