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　　谁能帮我改一下英语作文?EricChienandYueyueSaiarebothmyvolleyballcoach.Theyallaregoodatvolleyball,andbothhavenicepersonalities.Andarebothveryniceandexcellentcoachesforcoachingthevolleyballteam.Firstofall,Eric

　　谁能帮我改一下英语作文?

　　EricChienandYueyueSaiarebothmyvolleyballcoach.Theyallaregoodatvolleyball,andbothhavenicepersonalities.Andarebothveryniceandexcellentcoachesforcoachingthevolleyballteam.

　　Firstofall,Ericisanawesomeperson,usuallysmilesmostofthetime,evenifheisn’treallyinagoodmood.However,Yueyuedoesn’tsmileasmuchasEric,andsheexpressesherfeelingsinhertalksandmotions.Buttheyareallnicecoacheswhichmakeallofusontheteamtobecomebetteratvolleyballandbetterteamwork.

　　Secondly,theyareclement,active,andfriendlytoalltheothers.Ericisthecaptainofthevarsityvolleyballteamspikinghispotentandastonishingspikes,andisthepresidentformagicclublearningverymysteriousmagic.Ontheotherhand,Yueyueisagreatactressinthedramaclub,actingalotofdifferentandinterestingshows.

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2019-11-2200:34

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　　Lastly,Ericappearstobehandsomewhenheisplayingsports,withhis“killing”spikes,andallthepowerandskillshehas.But,restofthetime,helookskindofcute.UnlikeEric,Yueyueisusuallycute,butseriouswhensheisplayingandteachingusvolleyball.IhaveknownbothofthemwhenIparticipatedintheCISSAvolleyballteam,andarenowfriendstobothofthem.

　　Inconclusion,EricandYueyuearetwoofmybestcoaches.Theybothareawesome,clever,andIhopethatonsomeday,myvolleyballskillswillbeasgoodastheirs.AndIwillneverforgetthe“killing”spiking.

　　sorry,没地方了,所以不要忘了,这儿还有一段.谢谢.