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  能帮我看看这篇英语作文有哪些错吗MynameisLihua,whowasborninGuangZhouonFebruary1988.IhavebeenschoolingatGuangMingPrimarySchoolduring1955-2001andenterinTheSixthMiddleschoolsince2001.MymajorsubjectisChines

  能帮我看看这篇英语作文有哪些错吗

  MynameisLihua,whowasborninGuangZhouonFebruary1988.IhavebeenschoolingatGuangMingPrimarySchoolduring1955-2001andenterinTheSixthMiddleschoolsince2001.MymajorsubjectisChinese,Math,English,Physic,ChemistryandComputer.IhaveatalentforEnglishandcomputerandIwonthefirstplaceinmyschool'scomputercompetion.InadditionIlikecollectingstamp,swimming,popmuscicandskating.

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2019-10-2113:35
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  MynameisLihua.IwasborninGuangZhouinFebruary1988.(月份之前介词用in,日期之前介词用on)IstudiedatGuangMingPrimarySchoolduring1955-2001(ORZ这个年份是不是1995……)andenteredTheSixthMiddleSchoolin2001.(since要用完成时,也可以andhavebeenstudyinginTheSixthMiddleSchoolsince2001)Mymajorsubjects.(好多个学科,所以用复数)areChinese,Maths,English,Physic,ChemistryandComputer.IhaveatalentinEnglishandcomputerandIwonthefirstprizeinmyschool'scomputercompetion.Inaddition,Ilikecollectingstamps,swimming,popmuscicandskating.

2019-10-21 13:39:18
时峰

  MynameisLihua.IwasborninGuangZhouinFebruary1988怎么合成一句的,因为是五句话作文.谢谢。还有骑士那里是2001到2007在广州第六中学上学,但合成一句我不知道怎么写。。麻烦了点不好意思...

2019-10-21 13:40:23
牛犇

  额,其实用定语从句MynameisLihua,whowasborninGuangZhouonFebruary1988.语法上来讲好像也没有错,但是这样讲怪怪的。要不就MynameisLihuaandIwasborninGuangZhouonFebruary1988……?IstudiedatGuangMingPrimarySchoolduring1995to2001andGuangzhouSixthSecondarySchoolfrom2001to2007.你们中学的名字的翻译我不太确定。这样子简单一点可以吗?再就是IstudiedatGuangMingPrimarySchoolduring1995to2001,afterwhichIenteredGuangzhouSixthSecondarySchoolandstudiedtherefrom2001to2007.还有应该是haveatalentfor,我刚才给改错了,抱歉……

2019-10-21 13:44:04
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