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  帮我看看这篇作文咋样MynameisSonghongwei,whoisa13-year-oldboy,Iamstudyatjiaodamiddleschool.Iamgoodatmyclassmate.Icanplaynotonlybasketball,butalsofootball.Ithinkthey’reexciting.Iwanttojointheyourclub.Ilike

  帮我看看这篇作文咋样

  MynameisSonghongwei,whoisa13-year-oldboy,Iamstudyatjiaodamiddleschool.Iamgoodatmyclassmate.Icanplaynotonlybasketball,butalsofootball.Ithinkthey’reexciting.Iwanttojointheyourclub.IlikeEnglishverymuch,Ithinkit’sinteresting,IcanlearnaboutEnglishhistory.

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2020-12-3005:52
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  最好将第一句改成:Iama13-year-oldboynamedSonghongwei.这样短的句子没必要用定语从句.第二句是现在进行时,将study改成studying;jiaoda中的j大写.第三句你是说‘我能与同学相处的好’吗?Icangetalon...

2020-12-30 05:53:47
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