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  写了篇托福英文口语文章请求狠拍砖ithinkthemostmemorableeventisabasketballgameinmycollege.thisbasketballgamegavemelotsofinspirationaboutlife.forexample,wheniencounterdifficultiesinmylife,icantofacebravel

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  ithinkthemostmemorableeventisabasketballgameinmycollege.thisbasketballgamegavemelotsofinspirationaboutlife.forexample,wheniencounterdifficultiesinmylife,icantofacebravely.teamworkisveryimportant.aslongasnevergiveupneverlosehope,nothingisimpossible.ourbasketballteamisthelastoneofourgroupatthattime,inmymemory.wewouldhavetofacethewinnerofanothergroup.wefoldedsomuchpressure,butthroughthejointeffortsofourteam,wefinallywon.thanksofourteam.

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2020-12-2818:56
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  没细节,没重点,内容好平淡.没连接词.

  错误太多了,好好理顺了再写吧.

  icantofacebravely.(can不加to..)而且这个EXAMPLE很突兀.

  一段中的中心句一定要放前2句里,要不然老外就看不懂了.

  wouldhaveto是什么意思(本来要做却没做?)

  foldedsomuchpressure(fold第一次看到这样用)

2020-12-28 19:00:45
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