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　　麻烦帮我改改Atimberverandapostisastructuralbuildingelementwhichprovidessupporttotheroofofveranda.Itismoderatelydifficulttoreplace,however,sinceitisexposed,failureofaverandapostcanbeeasilydetectedduringnormalma

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　　Atimberverandapostisastructuralbuildingelementwhichprovidessupporttotheroofofveranda.Itismoderatelydifficulttoreplace,however,sinceitisexposed,failureofaverandapostcanbeeasilydetectedduringnormalmaintenance.Therefore,accordingtotheassessmentfordurabilityrequirementinB2,averandapostwouldbestfitinthe15yeardurabilityrequirement.

　　Agypsumplasterwallboardsisusedtomakeinteriorwalls.Itisastructuralbuildingelement,howeveritdoesnotprovidestabilitytothebuilding.Itisactuallynotdifficulttoreplacebuttimeconsuming.Failureofagypsumplasterwallboardcanbeeasilydetectedduringnormalmaintenanceasitssurfaceisexposed.Therefore,accordingtotheassessmentfordurabilityrequirementinB2,agypsumplasterwallboardwouldbestfitinthe15yeardurabilityrequirement.

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2020-12-2701:36

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　　写得非常清楚了.不过我还是本着吹毛求疵精神,提一点文法方面的建议,供参考哈.

　　〔〕中的部分应去除.

　　（）中是改过的地方.

　　Atimberverandapostisastructuralbuildingelement(that)providessupporttotheroofofveranda.Itismoderatelydifficulttoreplace,however,sinceitisexposed,failureofaverandapostcanbeeasilydetectedduringnormalmaintenance.Therefore,accordingtotheassessmentfordurabilityrequirementinB2,averandapostwouldbestfitinthe15yeardurabilityrequirement.

　　Agypsumplasterwallboard[s]isusedtomakeinteriorwalls.Itisastructuralbuildingelement,howeveritdoesnot(add)stabilitytothebuilding.(Itsreplacementisnotdifficult)buttimeconsuming.Failureofagypsumplasterwallboardcanbeeasilydetectedduringnormalmaintenanceasitssurfaceisexposed.Therefore,accordingtotheassessmentfordurabilityrequirementinB2,agypsumplasterwallboardwouldbestfitinthe15yeardurabilityrequirement.