帮忙看看什么地方语法或者单词有错误或者句子读不通顺,帮改正一下.很重要.谢谢了ChangesYoumayconsiderthatabroadlifeisveryboring.Becauseofthelanguagebarrierwecannotmakemanyfriendsanddonotknowhowt

　　帮忙看看什么地方语法或者单词有错误或者句子读不通顺,帮改正一下.很重要.谢谢了

　　Changes

　　Youmayconsiderthatabroadlifeisveryboring.Becauseofthelanguagebarrierwecannotmakemanyfriendsanddonotknowhowtodealwiththeplentyofsparetime.ButIthink,abroadlifeletmylifebewonderful.

　　IusedtobelazyandIdidnotlikedoinghousework.EvrythingIdidallneedmother’shelp.Butnow,Iamahardworkingperson.Icandoalotofhousework,suchascleaningtheroom,washingthedishes,cooking,doingtheshoppingandsoon.Ithinkdoingthehouseworkcanhelpmegrowupandbeindependent.

　　Inhighschool,IwasinterestedincomputergamesandIspentmostofmytimeonit.Myparentswereworriedaboutme.ButnowIliketomakefriendsandtakepartinallkindsofactivities.Iprefershoppingandhikingwithmyfriends.SoIambecomingmuchhealthierthanbefore.Sometimes,theschoolorganizesmanyculturalexperienceactivities,sothatIcanmakealotoffriendsandalsocanlearnmoreaboutKorea.Whenapproachingholidays,Wewillmaketravelplans,usuallywiththeleastmoneytogotomoreplaces.Althoughverytired,weareverysatisfied.

　　Ilovemychanges,becauseeverydayhasbeenverysubstantialandmeaningful(220)