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  英语高三作文关于雾霾的作文.1、描述雾霾天气的景象.提出解决这一问题的建议Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,morepollutionappearsinourdailylife.Allofthose,hazeisoneofthemostseriouslyproblemsaroun

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  关于雾霾的作文.1、描述雾霾天气的景象.提出解决这一问题的建议

  Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,morepollutionappearsinourdailylife.Allofthose,hazeisoneofthemostseriouslyproblemsaroundus.Ifpeoplestillpaynoattentiontothis,deathwillwaitingforus.

  Hazeissimilartofog,butitisdifferentfromfog.Notonlydoesitcausediseasebutalsoitincreasetheriskofcancer.ShanghaihassufferedhazeformanytimesWhenyouaredriving,youcannotseetheroadfront.Itissodangerousthatdriversmayhasatrafficaccidentbecauseofgaze.Andmostpeoplewearrespiratorwhentheyareoutside

  Thesourceofhazeareautomobileexhaust,buringandindustrialexhaustgas.MorecarShanghaihas,heaviesthazeShanghaihas.

  Inmyopinion,hazeproblemisnecessarytobesolvedinthenearfuture.First,theheavilyindustriesshouldbeclosed.Second,theaccountofcarsshouldbecontrol,andgovernmentshouldencouragecitizenstotakepublictraffic.Last,theawareofhazeshouldbepaycloseattentiontoeveryone.

  Onlybythesecanwestayinapeacefulnature.Itiseveryone'sresponsibilitiesthatprotecttheearthfrombeingpolluted.

  语法错误很多,望修改

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2019-10-0604:59
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刘利强

  你想帮改错?

2019-10-06 05:01:51
刘利强

  写作文给你个建议,用短句。而且少用难的单词与句子。表达层次分明,你最想说的重点。在你的文中看到很多逗号。这样时态和动词一定要保持一致。

  下面是我给你改的,可能也有些错误,仅供参考。

2019-10-06 05:03:12
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