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　　【Therearesomanypeopletalkingabouthowmuchtheirmotherlovethem,whereasseldompeoplerealiz有没有语法错误帮我找下Therearesomanypeopletalkingabouthowmuchtheirmotherlovethem,whereasseldompeoplerealizehowmuchlovethe】

　　Therearesomanypeopletalkingabouthowmuchtheirmotherlovethem,whereasseldompeoplerealiz

　　有没有语法错误帮我找下

　　Therearesomanypeopletalkingabouthowmuchtheirmotherlovethem,whereasseldompeoplerealizehowmuchlovetheirfathergivethem.Infact,father'sloveisasstrongasmother's,butasusual,Father'sloveisdeepandsilent,that'swhymostpeoplethinktheirfatherlovethemless.butyouwillnoticeyourfatherisalwaystherewhenyouneedhimappear,thoughtheyneversaiditoutloudhowmuchtheyloveyou,Soweshouldloveourfather速度

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　　问题如下：

　　1.theirfather后面　+S

　　2.出现了好几个but,而且不同与though　不能同时用；

　　3.mostpeople　建议修改成　mostofchildren

　　3.英语不是很地道,有点像chinglish

　　butyouwillnoticeyourfatherisalwaystherewhenyouneedhimappear,thoughtheyneversaiditoutloudhowmuchtheyloveyou,Soweshouldloveourfather

　　建议这样说：Ifyoupaymoreattentiontoyourfather,youwillrealizethatyourfatherisalwaystherewhenyouneedhim.Theynevertoldyouhowmuchtheyloveyou,buttheyshowtheirloveinactions.Soweshouldloveourfathers.