短文改错高一多多帮忙DearLiXiaojun,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.I'dliketodisscusstheproblem----withyou.Itistruethatsomevideogamesisgoodforyour----thinkingabilityandtheycansometimesmakeyoufeltrelased----

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　　DearLiXiaojun,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.I'dliketodisscusstheproblem----withyou.Itistruethatsomevideogamesisgoodforyour----thinkingabilityandtheycansometimesmakeyoufeltrelased----Therefore,youarespendingtoomuchtimeonthat.----Youarenotlittleboyanymore.Youshouldlearntocontrolyourself.----Whynottotrytofinishyourhomeworkfirsteveryday----andthenspendalittletimeplaysomevideogames.Ithink,----likeastudent,themostimportantthingistostudyhardatschool.----Youshouldtryyourbesttogetgoodgradeinyour----subjectsandtrytobecomeausefulpersonforthefuture.----