求大家帮忙纠正一下这片商务英语信函里的错误,帮忙看一下什么地-查字典问答网

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　　求大家帮忙纠正一下这片商务英语信函里的错误,帮忙看一下什么地方不对,DearSir,I'mwritingtoinformyouthatmyenglishcourseswillbefinishedon19november.Iwaswonderingifyouhadanyideasaboutnextstep?whatwou

　　求大家帮忙纠正一下这片商务英语信函里的错误,帮忙看一下什么地方不对,

　　DearSir,

　　I'mwritingtoinformyouthatmyenglishcourseswillbefinishedon19november.Iwaswonderingifyouhadanyideasaboutnextstep?whatwouldyouadvisemetodo?It'snecessaryformetoconfirmwhetherIcouldcomebackagainasearlyaspossible.DoyouthinkIcouldcomebackagain?WouldyouplantocometoBeijingthismonth?CouldwemeetinBeijing?

　　Pleasewritebackwhenyouhavethetimeandletmeknowwhatyouthink.

　　Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

　　BestRegards,

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吕江清

　　认真读了你的信函,除以下问题外,你的英语是过关的:

　　1)你对用过去时表达客气方式及虚拟有误解,这也是很多人容易犯的错误;

　　2)正式文本一定要注重大小,尽量不用缩写.

　　3)还有一些其他小错误.

　　另,有个别地方,虽然做了修改,但你原文没有错误,只是觉得该了会更好.

　　帮你修改如下:

　　DearSir,

　　I'mwritingtoinformyouthatmyEnglishcourseswillbefinishedonthe19thofNovember.Iamwonderingifyouhaveanyideaaboutthenextstep.Whatwouldyouadvisemetodo?It'snecessaryformetoconfirmwhetherIcancomebackagainasearlyaspossible.DoyouthinkIcancomebackagain?AreyouplanningtocometoBeijingthismonth?CanwemeateachotherinBeijing?

　　Pleasewritebackwhenyouhavetimeandletmeknowwhatyouthink.

　　Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

　　BestRegards,