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　　帮我看下这篇英文文章有没有错误有的话请帮忙改正帮我看看能拿几分按照高三的标准来看DearXiaoWang,Itistwoyearssincewesaidgoodbyeattheairport.Whatareyoudoingthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.Aswinter

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　　DearXiaoWang,

　　Itistwoyearssincewesaidgoodbyeattheairport.Whatareyoudoingthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.

　　Aswintervacationiscoming,I'dliketoinviteyoutoShanghai.Youknow,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghai,andifyoucome,I'lltakeyoutogosightseeing,andtogotovisittheBund,OrientalPearlTower,ShanghaiMuseum,YuGardenandsoon.Youcantakemanybeautifulphotos.

　　I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.

　　Bestwishes

　　Wendy

　　2012/11/5

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　　能拿13分.注意格式和细节.

　　DearXiaoWang,

　　Twoyearspastsincewesaidgoodbyeattheairport.Howareyoulately?Imissyouverymuch.

　　Wintervacationiscoming,I'dliketoinviteyoutoShanghai.Youknow,manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghai,andifyoucome,I'lltakeyoutogosightseeing,visittheBund,OrientalPearlTower,ShanghaiMuseum,YuGardenandsoon.Youcantakemanybeautifulphotos.

　　I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.

　　Bestwishes,

　　Wendy

　　2012/11/5