【改正英文错误ShanghailieinEastChina.Itisaninternationalcity.Anditisfamousforitnightviewandshoppingcenters.Itisalsooneofthelargestcityintheworld.Itisknownasthe''ShoppingParadise''becauseoftherearealotofdepa】

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　　ShanghailieinEastChina.Itisaninternationalcity.Anditisfamousforitnightviewandshoppingcenters.Itisalsooneofthelargestcityintheworld.Itisknownasthe''ShoppingParadise''becauseoftherearealotofdepartmentstoresandhugeshoppingcenters.IfyoucometoShanghai,IrecommendyouthatyoucangototheBeachatnightandyoucanseethefamousOrientalPearlTVTower.Atthedaytime,youcangoestoPeople'sSquare,theChengHuangTempleandmanyotherplacesofinterest.Inaword.Welcomeyou.