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  我写英语短文自己看不出哪里错误tonyisarestaurantwaiter,hehasabsolutepower.intheabsenceofthemanagerhewillbeinchargeoftherestaurant.nextmonth,theoldmanagerwillleave.thebossneedtochooseanewmanager.tonyi

  我写英语短文自己看不出哪里错误

  tonyisarestaurantwaiter,hehasabsolutepower.intheabsenceofthemanagerhewillbeinchargeoftherestaurant.

  nextmonth,theoldmanagerwillleave.thebossneedtochooseanewmanager.tonyisabilitytobeamanager,buthelikesdrinking.heoftenabandonedhimselftodespair.Forthisreason,thebossdiscardtonytobeamanager.hechoosesanewperson,Jely.

  Jely'schildhoodlivedabroad,Hehatessomeonewhodrunken.whenheisbeingtomanager,hechangesmanyrules.Themostimprotantruleisthateveryonecannotdrinkingwhentheyareworking.Tonycannotacceptthisrule.heisangeratjely.

  Lovewastotallyabsentfromtony'schildhood,hehasabnormalmind.hecallshisfriendkeviw,theymadeanaccidentwhenjelyaccessedtotheroad.Lucky,jelyslightlyinjured,hethoughtitwasnotannormalaccident.hecallthepolice.

  Afteraweek,thepolicehaveabsoluteproofoftony'sguilt.keviwisaccomplice.

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2020-12-1903:36
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孟令强

  1.thebossneedtochooseanewmanager中的need改为needs

  2.注意大写

  3.Hehatessomeonewhodrunken改为Hehatesthezonked

  4.这前后时态不对劲,把2段改为过去将来时,最后一段有问题.

2020-12-19 03:36:41
程君

  太谢谢你了最后一段怎么改呢

2020-12-19 03:39:09
孟令强

  整段都要改,最好重写下最后一段。

2020-12-19 03:40:26
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