【请帮我检查一下我的这篇英语作文.如果发现错误,请指出并帮忙改正.假如你的英国笔友Peter来信说寒假要来中国旅游,希望你能回信给一些吃喝玩乐以及游览名胜古迹的攻略.DearPeter:I’mverygla】

　　请帮我检查一下我的这篇英语作文.如果发现错误,请指出并帮忙改正.

　　假如你的英国笔友Peter来信说寒假要来中国旅游,希望你能回信给一些吃喝玩乐以及游览名胜古迹的攻略.

　　DearPeter:

　　I’mverygladthatyouwillcometoChinainthewinterholiday,andit’smyhonortotellyousomewheregoodtovisitinourcountry.

　　Beijinghasmanyhistoricspotsandinterestplaces.Haveyoueverheardof“hewhodoesn'treachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman”?Ithinkyoumayhave.So,IsuggestthatyoucangoandvisittheGreatWall.WhenyouclimbontheGreatWall,youwillfindthatitislikeadragon,andyoucanfeastyoureyesonthebeautifulscene.You’dbetterbringsomefoodandwater,becausethelongwalkmaymakeyoutired.Whenyou’rehungry,youcangotothenearestrestaurant.

　　Intheafternoon,youcanvisittheTian'anmenSquare.Intheotherdays,youcangotootherfamousplace,suchastheImperialPalace.

　　Yours,

　　William