Revisethefollowingsentencestomakethemdirect,simple,andconversational.2.Arequestthatwearemakingtomanagersisthattheynotspendalltheirtimeintheirdepartmentsandinsteadvisitotherdepartmentsonehouramonth.3.weinmanagement

　　Revisethefollowingsentencestomakethemdirect,simple,andconversational.

　　2.Arequestthatwearemakingtomanagersisthattheynotspendalltheirtimeintheirdepartmentsandinsteadvisitotherdepartmentsonehouramonth.

　　3.weinmanagementareoftheopinionthatemployeeshavenotbeenmadesufficientlyawareoftheproblemofcomputersecurity.

　　5.pleasebeadvisedthatitisourintentiontomakeeveryefforttodeliveryourorderbythedateofyourrequest,December1

　　6.enclosedherewithpleasefindtheproposalwhichwehavethehonortosubmittoouresteemedorganizationinregardtotheacquisitionandpurchaseoflaptopcomputers

　　7.ithasbeenestablishedthattheincontestablekeytothefuturesuccessofquadcamisadeepandfirmcommitmenttoquality.

　　8.itisoursuggestionthatyoudonotattempttomoveforwarduntilyouseekandobtainapprovaloftheplanfromtheteamleaderpriortobeginningthisproject.

　　9.ithasbeendeterminedbythestaffthatourprocessofcheckverificationforcustomersmustbesimplified.

　　10.pastexperiencehasindicatedthatemployeeswhohavehadtheopportunitytoattendtrainingsessionsbenefitmostgreatlywhenthosesessionsarenotoverlylong.

　　11.ifdoubtisentertainedregardinganoptimalsolutiontotheproblemofacquiringnewequipment,mayIsuggestthatwerefertheproblemtoanewlyappointedteam.

　　12itisthepersonalopinionofthiswriterthatwhendeadlineshavethecharacteristicsofnegotiation,theyarenolongereffective.