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　　急请英语写作高手帮我检查文章语法请大家帮我检查下面的段落是否表达清晰,8.Inthe“shiplocksandwaterelevators”,theshiplockisusedtocausethedifferentwaterlevel.Theshipisraisedbybuoyancyforce.Thewat

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　　8.Inthe“shiplocksandwaterelevators”,theshiplockisusedtocausethedifferentwaterlevel.Theshipisraisedbybuoyancyforce.Thewaterintherivercankeeprunningandthewatercankeepatthesamelevelisbecauseofthenaturewatercirculation.Thewatercirculationiscausedbythesun.Asaresult,wecouldsaythatthesunprovidestheenergyforliftingtheship.ItissituatedinthemiddleoftheverticalfarmasshowninFigure27.WhenitcomestoANSIproject,therewillalsobealocktocontrolthewaterlevelintwodifferentshafts.Theelevatorwillalsobeliftedbytheupliftforce.Tokeepthewaterlevel,itisalsointendedtousethesolarpower.The“PVtree”willbehelpfulingatheringtheenergyfromthesun.Theenergywillbeprovidedtoapumpunderthecreek.Thepumpisgoingtokeeponpumpingthewaterintothewaterstacksoastokeepthewateratthesamelevel.Thispumpsystemissimilarwiththemodernhydraulicelevator.

　　9.In“Tannerspringpark,Portland”project,theArtWallisbuiltbyarowofrailtracks.Thesehardsticksareconnectedbyandcanrevolvearoundanaxis.Themovementisreflectedinthewaterthuscreateanattractivesight.

　　10.WhethertheyaresuitabletobeappliedinANSIwilldependontheirfunctionaswellasthelocalsituationincludingtheclimateandtheculture.Forexample,thewaterandentertainmentsystemsreviewedabovecanhelpANSIwaterscapetobemoreattractiveandinteresting,andtherearenotmuchclimateandcultureconsiderations,sotheywillbesuitabletobeappliedinANSI.

　　11.However,there’snodoubtthatthepanelsofthePVtreeontheverticalfarmwillbemuchbiggerthantheoneonMilan.Itisbecausetheenergyneededtopumparound100m3waterwillbemuchbiggerthantooperate100wlight.Howbigwillthepanelsbeisgoingtobecalculatedlaterduringthedesign.

　　12.Fromtheliteraturereview,theresearcherhaslearnedsomeadvancetechnologyrelatedtowaterandhasstudiedsomesamplewaterscapeandenergyefficientdesignprojects.What’smore,howthesewatersystemscouldbeappliedinANSIhasbeenanalysed.Inaddition,theresearchgapsandproblemshavebeenfound.

　　13.Firstofall,therehavealreadybeensomeadvancedwatersystems

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　　第27段

　　Inaddition,theelevatorwillbeliftedbytheupliftforce.

　　itisalsointendedtousethesolarpower.(去掉also)

　　第10段

　　muchclimateandcultureconsiderations（many)

　　and(去掉and,重新起一句大写Because)therearenotmuchclimateandcultureconsiderations,sotheywillbesuitabletobeappliedinANSI.

　　第11段

　　It(that)isbecausetheenergyneededtopumparound100m3waterwillbemuchbigger(muchmore)thantooperate100wlight

　　第12段

　　Fromtheliteraturereview,theresearcherhaslearnedsomeadvancetechnology（加复数）relatedtowaterandhas（去掉andhas改逗号）studiedsome(aplentyof代替some)samplewaterscapeandenergyefficientdesignprojects.somesamplewaterscapeandenergyefficientdesignprojects

　　第13段

　　Firstofall,（去掉）（加Although,therehavealreadybeensomeadvancedwatersystemsusedforwatertreatment,waterutilization,andwatercelebration,(afewofthemcanbeapplieddirectlyinANSI.

　　However,(逗号）mostofthemneedtoberevisedandintegratedinordertohavemore(改comprehensive)functions.

　　also,（改大写Also)furtherdesignneedtobedonetointegratethesesystemstothebuildingstructureandthelandscapestructure.

　　第14段

　　Inaddition(改为furthermore)

　　Asaresult(改为Therefore)

　　Asaresult,thisresearchisgoingtoanalysethedesignprocessandcontribute(去掉will)todesignlearningandteaching.