这篇作文有语法错吗?MyfavoritebookisHarrypotter.Ithinkitisaniceandafunnybook.Itisgoodforusteenagers.Ilikereaditbecauseitisfullofsciencefiction,itiseasytounderstandanditisthemostfunnybookihaveread.I

　　这篇作文有语法错吗?

　　MyfavoritebookisHarrypotter.Ithinkitisaniceandafunnybook.Itisgoodforusteenagers.

　　Ilikereaditbecauseitisfullofsciencefiction,itiseasytounderstandanditisthemostfunnybookihaveread.Ihavelearnedalotfromit.Iknowthatasateenager,weshouldbeconfidenceandbrave.SoasHarry.Andweshouldloveandprotectourfriends.Weallneedfriends.Weallneedgetalongwellwithourfriends.Ifihavethechancetolearnsomemagic,i'dlovetobeateenagerlikeHarrypotter.Flyinganddosomemagictricks,that'smyinterestandthat'sthemostimportantreasonwhyilovereadHarrypottersomuch.