帮我看看这段英文有错误的地方吗语法有错误的请告知,谢谢!MyhometownisFoShan.Asweknow,itisabigctiy,andithasalargepopulation.SOfarin2008,itisabout6million.Besidesthat,FoShanisafamoushometownof
帮我看看这段英文有错误的地方吗
语法有错误的请告知,谢谢!
MyhometownisFoShan.Asweknow,itisabigctiy,andithasalargepopulation.SOfarin2008,itisabout6million.Besidesthat,FoShanisafamoushometownofoverseaschinese,andithasalonghistory.
Ifyouwanttohavevisit,youcancomeallyeararound,becausetheweatherthereisverywarm.AndFoShanhassomeespecialbuswhichgoaroundthecityallthetime,anditneedsonly2yuan.So,thebestmeansoftransportationthevisitorsshouldusetomycityisbus.
Andhotels,IthinktheJinChengHotelisgood.Itisinthecenterofthecity.Thisisgoodforyourtrip,Iguess.
VisitingFoShanandIthinkyoushouldn’tmissthreeplaces.TheyareXiQiaoMountainOfNanHai、PeachParkOfSouthland,andtheJadeHole.XiQiaoMountainisthemostbeautifulplaceinmyhometown.Itissaidthatitcamefromthesealonglongago.Itisexcitingthatthereare28waterfalls.Itissocool.AndXiQiaobigcakeisveryfamousthere.Itisyummyanditisfunny.Wecanbuysomeforourfriendsaspresents.
Talkingaboutthefood,CakeOfBlinds、GaoMingLycheeareverygoodpresents.Intherestaurant,ZhuHouChicken、MaCheDogMeatarethefamousmaindishesinFoShan.
Ihopeyoucancometomyhometown.