【请英语大仙帮帮忙,看看本人的英语作文有哪些要修改的地方,初二水平的书面表达.Itwasabright,sunnyday.MikeandBobrodethebiketogotothepark.Arrivedatthepark,MikeandBobsatonthegrass.Bobtooksomebooksout】
请英语大仙帮帮忙,看看本人的英语作文有哪些要修改的地方,初二水平的书面表达.
Itwasabright,sunnyday.MikeandBobrode
thebiketogotothepark.Arrivedatthepark,MikeandBobsatonthe
grass.Bobtooksomebooksoutsideandreadsthem.MikebesideBobandatesome
nicefood.WhileMikewaseatingthehamburger,amonkeywascominganditwas
stolingMike'shamburger.Mikewassoangrythathesatupandpursuedthe
monkey.Hefollowedthemonkey.ToMike'ssurprise,themonkeywasmissingina
tree.Mikecouldn'tfindthemonkeyatlast.Hefeelsverysad.