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  【求教高手改改小弟的英语作文CollegelifeYoumayfeelthatcollegelifeistiring.therearealotoftime.Wedonotknowwhattodo.ButIthinkcollegelifeiswonderful.Ifyouhavemuchtime,youcanplaybasketball,footballandsoon.Sp】

  求教高手改改小弟的英语作文

  Collegelife

  Youmayfeelthatcollegelifeistiring.therearealotoftime.Wedonotknowwhattodo.ButIthinkcollegelifeiswonderful.

  Ifyouhavemuchtime,youcanplaybasketball,footballandsoon.Sportsareveryinteresting.

  Inotherwords,youcandoanythingwhichyouareinterestedin.Donotnervous.Wearefriends.

  Collegeanewbeginning.Youcancontinuetostudyhardforthebetterresult.Libaryisagoodplacesthatstudentstudyinit.Ifyouwanttoshowyourintellegont.Youcanjoininallkindsofkindsofactivities.

  Inaword,collegelifeiswonderful!

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2020-12-1502:34
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  第二句"thereisalotoftime."

  第三段不应用"inotherwords",换用"besides"."donotnervous"应为"don'tbenervous".

  第四段第一句"collegeisaplacewhereyoustartabrandnewlife.""forthebetterresult"改为"forabetterresult"较好.

  "libraryisagoodplaceforstudentstostudy."

  "intelligence"拼写错误.

  "joininallkindsofactivities"

2020-12-15 02:37:45
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