【本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?31公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.MostChinesemanaresmoke,nomattert】

　　本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?31

　　公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.

　　MostChinesemanaresmoke,nomattertheyareworking,chattingorwaitting.Nowmostpeoplehaverealizedtheharmofsmoke,mostofthemhavegaveupsmoke,butwecouldseesomepeoplesmokinginpublicplacesbeforenowwhereverwewentto.

　　Smokinginpublicplaces,causingaseriesofproblems.Firstly,thatwillmakethepeoplearoundyoufeelbored.Secondly,smokinginpublicplacesmaketheenvironmentworse.Inordertonotaffectothersandpollutetheenvironment,youhadbetternottosmokinginpublicplaces.

　　Whatisthemeaningofbansmokinginpublicplaces?Inmyview,firstly,thisisaneffectionwaytoreducethenumberofsmokingpeople.Secondly,itcankeepothers'notbeaffected.Thirdly,itcanprotecttheenvironmentnotbepollute.SoIagreetobansmokinginpublicplaces