帮我找出这些句子中的语病单句改错1.hisnamewascomeupwheneveritcametothematterofnuclearenergy2.asmanyas62500peoplediedasresultoftheearthquake3.shefeltliketoyellathim,butshewasdeterminednottolosehersel

　　帮我找出这些句子中的语病单句改错

　　1.hisnamewascomeupwheneveritcametothematterofnuclearenergy

　　2.asmanyas62500peoplediedasresultoftheearthquake

　　3.shefeltliketoyellathim,butshewasdeterminednottoloseherself-control

　　4.there'snodoubtwhetheronedayhewillsucceed

　　5.imadehertopomisenottotellanyone,andshesaidshewouldkeepmysecret

　　能不能顺带翻译一下？