【各位帮我看看几句英文语法对不1.SheisanoutstandingstudentandIwasdeeplyimpressedwithhernotonlysheisaspecificstudentinourdepartment,butmoreimportantly,becauseofthecapabilityandeagernessforfurtheracademicpur】

　　各位帮我看看几句英文语法对不

　　1.SheisanoutstandingstudentandIwasdeeplyimpressedwithhernotonlysheisaspecificstudentinourdepartment,butmoreimportantly,becauseofthecapabilityandeagernessforfurtheracademicpursuitshedemonstratedwhilelearningtheknowledgeinvolvedinmyclass.（notonly后面要加because吗）

　　2.MissWualwaysdothehomeworkseriously,sheaimherselfasoneofthememberinourdepartment.（中间不加and可以吗）

　　3.What’smore,notonlyissheinquisitiveandkeentoprobeintonewproblemsandknowledge,andalsocanshedevoteherselftothedetailed,elementary,time-consumingworksinsolvingproblems.（可以用andalso吗?还是应该改成butalso?）

　　事实上是中介写的，我看了感觉有点问题才问的

　　中介说第三句是老外写的，没有错。。。