可不可以帮我改一下这篇英语作文,帮我加上一些好的句子和内容,最后结尾AnEnjoyableTripLastyear,IwenttoEnglandwithmyfamily.Ihadwonderfultrip.Onthefirstday,wewenttoLondon,thecapitalofEngland.Wevisite
可不可以帮我改一下这篇英语作文,帮我加上一些好的句子和内容,最后结尾
AnEnjoyableTrip
Lastyear,IwenttoEnglandwithmyfamily.Ihadwonderfultrip.
Onthefirstday,wewenttoLondon,thecapitalofEngland.
WevisitedsomeattractionssuchasBuckinghampalace,BigBenandBritishMuseum.
WhenweenteredtheBuckinghampalacehall,weweresurprised.Becauseitwaswonderful.
BigBenwasthebiggestclockintheEngland,alsoitwasthesymbolsofLondon.
BritishMuseumisoneofthemostfamousmuseumintheworld.Itcollectedthepreciouscollectionfromdifferentcountries.
InvisitingtheBritishmuseum,IlearnedEngland’shistoryandculture.
Onthenextday,wewenttooxfordstreet,itwastheLondonshoppingcentre.Ithadlotsoffamousbrandanditcanletyouenjoyedadvancedservice.Iboughtsomesouvenirstomyfriends.
Intheafternoon,wetrieddifferentBritishfoodsuchasEnglishfishchip,roastedbeefandYorkshirepudding.
IfIhadachance,Iwouldliketogothereagain.