高一英语改错一篇DearMr.Harris,I'mveryhappytowritethislettertoyoubecauseIhadreceivedadmissionnoticeofPekingUniversityyesterday.I'llstudyIT—justwhichIhavebeendreamingabout.Mr.Harris,Istillrememberthefirstdatewh

　　高一英语改错一篇

　　DearMr.Harris,

　　I'mveryhappytowritethislettertoyoubecauseIhad

　　receivedadmissionnoticeofPekingUniversityyesterday.

　　I'llstudyIT—justwhichIhavebeendreamingabout.

　　Mr.Harris,Istillrememberthefirstdatewhenyoubegan

　　toteachusthreeyearsbefore.Wewerequiteshyandpoorat

　　listeningandspeaking.Youpatientlyencouragedusto

　　practiseasmuchaspossibly.Yourclasswassolivelythat

　　allofuswereinterested.UnderyourhelpIimprovedmyEnglish

　　stepbystep,butintheentranceexaminationIgotasatisfactoryresult.

　　Mr.Harris,thankyouverymuch.HowdoImissyou!

　　Hopetohearfromyousoon.

　　Yours,

　　LiWen

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