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　　请帮忙检查一下这四段文字有没有错误,请帮忙检查一下以下文字有没有语法错误或不通顺的地方,Everytimewereadabookorseesomething,weshouldthinkmore.Ithelpsusrevealsomethingnewofvalueinthedullrout

　　请帮忙检查一下这四段文字有没有错误,

　　请帮忙检查一下以下文字有没有语法错误或不通顺的地方,

　　Everytimewereadabookorseesomething,weshouldthinkmore.Ithelpsusrevealsomethingnewofvalueinthedullroutineofeverydaylife.Inthisway,we'llhavethepowerofthinking.Butwhatwillitdo?

　　Thepowerofthinkinghelpspeoplewhothink.It'snormalthatwaterisboiledwhenitreachesthepropertemperature,butWatttookitahugeproblem.Hethoughtaboutitforhundredsoftimesandinventedthesteamengineaccordingtothewayitworked.

　　Thepowerofthinkingpunishespeoplewhodon'tthink.Newton,agreatphysicistwhofoundoutthegravityinhisyouth,butchosetodoubtallofhisachievementsandstopthinkingfortherestofhislife.Hemadehimselfajokeforeverybodytolaughat.

　　We'renotborntobeknowledgable.Asastudent,weshouldmakefulluseofwhatweknowandthinkmoresothatthepowerofthinkingwillhelpussucceedinthefuture.

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2020-12-0613:05

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何述东

　　Everytimewhenwereadabookandseesomethingmeaningful,wewouldthinkalot.whichhelpsusrevealsomethingnewofvalueinthedullroutineofeverydaylife.Inthisway,wewillhavethepowerofthinking.Butthenwhatwillthisdo?

　　Thepowerofthinkinghelpspeoplethinkdynamic.Itisnormalthatwaterisboilingwhenitreachespropertemperature,butWatttookinaverydifficultproblem.Hethoughtaboutitforhundredsoftimesandfinallyinventedthesteamenginebasedonthemethodwithwhichithasopperated.Thepowerofthinkingpunishespeoplewhodon'twanttothink.Newton,agreatphysicistwhofoundoutgravityinhisyouth,chosetodoubtaboutallhisachievementsandstopthinkingfortherestofhislife.Hemadehimselfajokeforeverybodytolaughat.

　　Wearenotborntobeknowledgeble.Asastudent,weshouldmakefulluseofwhatwehavelearntandmasteredanduseourbraintothinkmoresothatthepowerofthinkingwillhelpussucceedinthefuture..

　　你写的不错,goodessay

2020-12-06 13:06:27

陈珩

　　感谢您的回复在原文中：“butWatttookitahugeproblem.”的表达不知是否正确，而您的答案中“butWatttookinaverydifficultproblem.”似乎看得不是太懂，能否解释一下这个词组的用法

2020-12-06 13:07:34

何述东

　　takeitahugeproblem.it是多余的，不要只是指什么，take没有【拿】和【接受】的意思，我觉得用huge这词太大了takein有接受的意思可接名词，So，我用了Watttookinaverydifficultproblem.没那么夸张。语法也正确，仅此而已。Yourarticleisverynice,smoothandlogical.theexppresonsyouuseisveryneat.Itisabetterarticlethan...........EnjoyyourEnglish.

2020-12-06 13:10:28

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