GREissue写作求指点下面是题目和我写的文章,希望各位高人能指点迷津,先谢谢拉～题目："aslongaspeopleinasocietyarehungryoroutofworkorlackthebasicskillsneededtosurvive,theuseofpublicresourcesto

　　GREissue写作求指点

　　下面是题目和我写的文章,希望各位高人能指点迷津,先谢谢拉～

　　题目：

　　"aslongaspeopleinasocietyarehungryoroutofworkorlackthebasicskillsneededtosurvive,theuseofpublicresourcestosupporttheartsisinappropriate-and,perhaps,evencruel-whenoneconsidersallthepotentialusesofmoney."

　　文章：

　　Thewriter'sadvice,intheviewofcharities,isagoodidea.Inhisadvice,hesaysthateverypeopleinhungryoroutofworkorlackthebasicskillsforsurviveshouldhasthehighprioritytousethesocietyresources.However,fromthepointofthewholesocietydevelopment,thisideaisnotcompleteright.

　　Asweallknow,though,mostofusdidnotneedtoworriedabouthowtofindfoodsorhowtosurvive.Butattoday,therestillhavesomepeopleinsomeplacelikeAfrican,Haitiandsoon,needtostrugglefortheseproblems.Theyalwayshungry,outofwork,lackbasicskillsforsurvive.Fromthewriter'sperspective,thesepeoplearethegroupwhomostneedthesocietyresources.Afterall,wecannottosayhisideaiswrong.Ifwetakeafewpartofthemoneythatusedtoconstructmodernbuildingsorusedtobuyluxurygoodstothesepeople.Theirpoorlysituationwillbeimprovedsignificantly.Ifitispossible,forthesakeofhumanity,weshouldandmusttodothat.

　　Itisnotaproblemifthisisthewholestoryofthewriter'sadvice.Butthewriter'sideaisthatifthesepeoplestillexist,theuseofpublicresourcestosupporttheartsisinappropriateandevencruel.Thisisalittleextreme.hismeansthatweshouldtakeallofourresourcestosupportthesepeoplefirstandthenusetherestofthemtosupportthearts.Despitewhetherthisadviceisreasonable.Isthepovertyreallycanbeeliminatecompletely,itisaproblem.Throughtherelativityofthings.Wejustdoourbesttosolveit,butwecannotguaranteehowlongitwillbecompleteeliminated.Don'twenottosupportanyformofartsduringthistime?Theartisequallyimportanttooursociety,especiallyinthisageofplentifulmaterialproperty.

　　Insum,weshouldrespectthewriter'sjusticialadviceforthehumanity,butweshouldalsoknownthatthedevelopmentofsocietyneedsdiversity,mostofissuesshouldbeconsideredandbalancedratherthanjustdeveloponeofthem.Thewriter'spointobviously