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  【一篇英语作文,大家帮我改下,谢谢MySchoolIstudyintheNo.Imiddleschool,wheretherearethreegradesandthirty-twoclasses.Itisnotbigbutverybeautiful.Inthecenteroftheschoolthereisanewteachingbuilding,whichis】

  一篇英语作文,大家帮我改下,谢谢

  MySchool

  IstudyintheNo.Imiddleschool,wheretherearethreegradesandthirty-twoclasses.Itisnotbigbutverybeautiful.

  Inthecenteroftheschoolthereisanewteachingbuilding,whichisverycleanandbeautiful.Thelabbuildingandthelibraryaretotheeastofthenewbuilding.Thereallkindsofbookinthelibrary.Youcanenioythemasmanyasyoulike.

  Southofthenewbuildingliesaplaygroundandit'sverybig.Ontheplayground,youcanhavesportssuchasfootball.basketball.You'dbetterplaybasketballastherearefourbasketballgroundsinourschool,Youcanenjoyyourselfverymuch.

  Therearemanytreesinourschool.Grassiseverywhere.Infrontofthenewbuildingtherearetwogardensinwhich,thereareflowersofallcolours.

  Wearestudyinghardinourschool,Ourlifeishappyandintcrcsting.Iloveourschoolverymuch.

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2020-12-0612:54
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  Thereallkindsofbookinthelibrary应该为thereareallkindsofbookinthelibraryYoucanenioythemasmanyasyoulike.这句建议删掉,语法不对

  Southofthenewbuildingliesaplaygroundandit'sverybig.可以用thereisaplaygroundtothesouthofthenewbuilding代替youcanhavesports应该为youcanplaysports

2020-12-06 12:56:40
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