英语日记好心人帮忙改下.Lastmonth,itravelledtoQingYuanprovince,thiscityisverybeautiful.itisfamousforhotspringandraftingandhaveavariousofdeliciousfood.wewanttotakeariskfirstly.sowedecidedtogowaterrafting.wh
英语日记好心人帮忙改下.
Lastmonth,itravelledtoQingYuanprovince,thiscityisverybeautiful.itisfamousforhotspringandraftingandhaveavariousofdeliciousfood.
wewanttotakeariskfirstly.sowedecidedtogowaterrafting.whenwearrivedtothemostfamousraftingplacecalledXuanZhen,ithadhadalotofpeoplewaitedinline.Aftertenminutes,abustookustothetipmountain,itistheraftingsource.weputontheairjacketandothersafety.withexcitedmoodweweresetout.OH,itwassoirritative.ourraftrunveryfastandhittherockceaseless.theriverhasalotoffallandwhentheraftrusheddownthefall,wewerealmostgotintotheunderwater.ourclotheswerewetcompletely.butweweresohappy,cheeredloudly.inthemiddleoftheriver,therewasaflatwaterarea.ourraftgottogether.itwassofunny,somepeopleusedtheirhelmettofillwithwaterandfightedtheotherpeople.whataexcitingitwas.weallenjoythisfight.
afteronehour,wefinishedtheimposingtrip.
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