判断下列语段是否正确?怎样才能将作文写得更好?IcanstillrememberthatIwaspoorinEnglish.ItwasyouwhohelpedmewithmyEnglishnomatterhowharditis.WhenIfeelupset,youencouragedmetolearnitandnevergiveitup.A

　　判断下列语段是否正确?怎样才能将作文写得更好?

　　IcanstillrememberthatIwaspoorinEnglish.ItwasyouwhohelpedmewithmyEnglishnomatterhowharditis.WhenIfeelupset,youencouragedmetolearnitandnevergiveitup.AlthoughIalwaysgetintrouble,IstillfeelhappybecauseIdoitashardaspossiblebymyself.

　　LastFriday,ourschoolheldanEnglish-spokencontest.Ijoinedit.Tomysurprise,Igotthefirstprize.Throughingthiscontest,Iknowthereisnotroubleindoingeverythingthatyouwanttodoifyouputyouheartintoit.