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　　刚写的短文,英语达人帮忙检查一下错误!WhenIlivedinChina,Ihavestudiedoilpaintingfor2years.Iknowsomecharactersofoilpainting,suchasextremelystringentdrawings,decorativeandfullandrichcolors,andsmoothlinesofsym

　　刚写的短文,英语达人帮忙检查一下错误!

　　WhenIlivedinChina,Ihavestudiedoilpaintingfor2years.Iknowsomecharactersofoilpainting,suchasextremelystringentdrawings,decorativeandfullandrichcolors,andsmoothlinesofsymmetryofcomposition.ThosecharactersareallembodyinE.J.Hughespainting.

　　Ichoseonespecialpaintingfromhispaintings.Soletmeexplainwhythispictureisaspecialone.ThispicturedrewtheGabrielaIsland.Inallofhispaintingwhichissittingatthepictureshowinthedowntownbuilding.Mostofthepaintingshavehumancivilization.Forexample,somepictureshavechurchorship;somehavehighwayorfactory.Thispicturejustdrewnaturelandscapeandgaveexpressiontosymmetry.First,weputalinedownthemiddleofthepainting.Intheleftofthepaintingisanoceanandintherightofthepaintingisabeach.Sothissymmetryisoceantoland.Second,weputalineacrossonthemiddleofthepainting.Onthetopleftcorneristheskywhichcolorisblue.Onthelowerleftquarteristheoceanwhichcolorisblue.Sothetwopartsissymmetry.Onthetoprightcornerareforestandthelowerrightquarterisgrassplot.Whenweenjoythepicturewecanpayattentioninthesymmetry.

　　WhenIwasstudyingpainting,myteachershowedussomepaintings,like“TheStarryNight”and“CaféTerraceonthePlaceDuForum.”NowIalsoappreciatesomedifferentpainting.

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　　没有什么具体的语法错误,只是结构上显得有点不紧凑,一下只是我的一点小小的建议：IhavestudiedoilpaintingfortwoyearswhenIlivedinChina.Iknowsomecharacteristicsofoilpainting,suchasextremelystringentdrawings,decorativeandfullandrichcolors,andsmoothlinesofsymmetryofcomposition.ThosecharacteristicsareallembodyinE.J.Hughespainting.Ichoseonespecialpaintingofhis.Letmeexplainwhythispictureisspecial.ThispainterdrewtheGabrielaIslandinthispainting.Amongallofhispaintingswhichissittingatthepictureshowinthedowntownbuilding,mostofthepaintingsinvolvehumancivilization.Forexample,somepictureshavechurchorship;somehavehighwayorfactory.Thispicturejustpotrayednaturelandscapeandgaveangoodexpressiontosymmetry.First,weputalinedowntothemiddleofthepainting.Intheleftofthepaintingisanoceanandintherightisabeach.Sothissymmetryisoceantoland.Second,weputalineacrossonthemiddleofthepainting.Onthetopleftcorneristheskywhosecolorisblue.Onthelowerleftquarteristheoceaninblue.Sothetwopartsissymmetry.Onthetoprightcornerareforestandthelowerrightquarterisgrassplot.Whenweenjoythepicturewecanpayattentioninthesymmetry.WhenIwasstudyingpainting,myteachershowedussomepaintings,suchas“TheStarryNight”and“CaféTerraceonthePlaceDuForum.”NowIalsoappreciatesomedifferentpaintings.