托福作文求批改Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Atuniversitiesandcolleges,sportsandsocialactivitiesarejustasimportantasclassesandlibrariesandshouldreceiveequalfinancialsupport.Usespecificreasonsandex

　　托福作文求批改

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

　　Atuniversitiesandcolleges,sportsandsocialactivitiesarejustasimportantasclassesandlibrariesandshouldreceiveequalfinancialsupport.

　　Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

　　Nowadays,studentatcollegeoruniversitypaytheirallattentionontheirstudy.Smoepeoplemaythinkthatstudyinuniversityisthemostimportantthingyouhavetodoalsodoyourbest.however,someproplemaythinkthatstudentsmaydevelopalltheirabilitybeforetheywalkintojobmarket.Ibelievethatthelatteroneismorepreferable.

　　First,greatenterpriseandperfectopportunitiescomesfromgoodhealth.Withoutabodywhichwithgoodhealth,wecannotdoeverythingsuccessfulily.itcangiveusmoreopportunitiestocommunicationwithothers,upgradesourcommunicationskills.Also,itcanentertainourselves,bringmorepleasuretoouruniversitylife.Sosportsmaystandatthesamehighwithclasses.

　　furthermore,socialactivitiescanalsoincreasetheirknowledgeofthemselvsandtheworldaroundthem.Themoreexoirencestheyhave,thegreatertheyawaresthecompetitivejobmarket.Socialactivitiescanhelpthestudentspreparefortheircareerearlier,andtohavenewexperiencesthattheycannevergotfromthecalsses.

　　Finally,theseactivitiesmaybecanfindoutthepotentialabilitiesthattheyhaveneverbeenknowbefore.studentscanfindwhatjobstheygoodat,atthesametimeexpandtheirknowledgeinthesubjectstheyfoundinteresting.Ofcoursethismaybetheirtheirlastchanceforalongtimetoimprovetheirknowledgetheycannitbeheartedinclass,andalsotofindoutwhatreallybekeenon,notjustlimittedonthesubjectsthateverybodylearned.

　　Admittedly,classesandlibrariesdohavetheoradvanced,theycanmakestudentsunderstandtheknowledgeandexpreiencesmoreefficientlycansavemoretime.However,sportsandsocialactivitiescangivemorevalueableexperiencescomprehentedbythemselvesnotbywhatteachessay.Ithereforereinforcemystandpointthatweshouldgiveequaltreatmenttobothaspects,andalsotheequalfinancialsupport.