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  哥哥姐姐帮我看看英语作文DearfriendsI'mverygladtohavethechancetosaysomethingaboutsportsandhealth.Sportsisimportantforus.myfavoritesportisbasketball.Itnotonlymakemehappy,butalsoIcangetastrongbody.Idosport

  哥哥姐姐帮我看看英语作文

  Dearfriends

  I'mverygladtohavethechancetosaysomethingaboutsportsandhealth.

  Sportsisimportantforus.myfavoritesportisbasketball.

  Itnotonlymakemehappy,butalsoIcangetastrongbody.Idosportseveryday,youkonw,themoreexercisIdo,thehalthierIwillbeIfeelexcitedwhenIdoexercise,becauseofthat,Ibecomestrongerthanbefore.Inaword.Dosportsisagoodwaytogetbettergrade.

  Betterbody.Betterlifedomoreexercisessothatwecanlearnbetter.

  That'sall.Thankyou.

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2020-12-0301:38
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  Sportsis改为are……Itnotonlymake……改为makes这个句子不对,前后句主语不一致了,建议:Notonlyitmakesmehappy,butalsoIcangetastrongbody.正文第四行exercise打错了healthier打错了be后面句号...

2020-12-03 01:42:06
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