哪位高手帮我改改issue作文Issue:Althoughmanypeoplethinkthattheluxuriesandconveniencesofcontemporarylifeareentirelyharmless,infact,theyactuallypreventpeoplefromdevelopingintotrulystrongandindependentindividuals.Itwa

　　哪位高手帮我改改issue作文

　　Issue:Althoughmanypeoplethinkthattheluxuriesandconveniencesofcontemporarylifeareentirelyharmless,infact,theyactuallypreventpeoplefromdevelopingintotrulystrongandindependentindividuals.

　　Itwaspointedoutbyasocialistwagthatthemodernfacilitiesprovidedhumanswithmoreindependence.EversincetheIndustrialRevolution,peoplehavebenefitedfromthecontinuouslynewinventions.Automobile,forinstance,(a)servestoenhanceindependenceintransportationandresidenceand(b)makesitpossibleforpeopletotraveltoisolatedareaswithoutsufferingthestuffinessofpublictransportation.Theluxuriesandconveniencesprovidedbytheprogressionsofthesocietydogivepublicsomebenefitsandfreedom.However,somecontemporariesbegantoquestionthefreedomofsuchluxuriouslife.

　　Thebenefitsoftheluxuriesandconveniences,computersandcars,arequiteambiguous.Theinternetmakesourearthlikeavillageinawebofinformationandtelephonelines.Furthermore,carsmakepeopleallovertheworldtravelmorefreely.Whataluxurylife!Howconvenientitis!However,whenwelookbackuponwhathadhappened,wewillfindthat:(a)theinternetdrivesustobefrontofthescreenofcomputerfromchattingwithpeopleandreadingnewspaperdirectly;(b)theautomobiletakesthepartsofourfeet’sfunction;(c)thetelevisionsellsusinstantgratificationanddivertsusonlytodivert,tomaketimepasswithoutpain.Thosephenomenonmakeusrethinkwhatthemodernlifereallyshouldbe.Themodernlifemakesusmorereliableonthetechnologicfacilitiesnotonourselves.Perhaps,someday,wecan’tfindoutmessagesinthepiecesofnewspapersoutofcomputersandcan’twalkanymoreoutofcars.Whatapity!

　　I’mnotaLuddite,butIdobelievethatitismoreimportantforustotrytogetabalancebetweentheluxuriesandconveniencesofthecontemporarylife(themodern,technologicfacilities)andtheabilitiesofourselves.AsfarasIknow,modernlifeshouldhelptobuildupourbody,torefineourcharactersandtomakeusindependentandstrongerintheenvironment.Justas“Twosidesofthesamecoin”,ourhumanbeingsshouldmakebestuseofthecontemporarylifetoreallyimproveourselvesbutnottobereliableonthosee