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　　【一道英文改错题,最好写上原因,一共十处.分可能有点少,but,如果需要,等我转来分,再给你~IwassohappywhenIgotaletteronmybirthdayontheMay12,2000frommymominChina.IcometotheU.S.in1992.Thatwastheeight】

　　一道英文改错题,最好写上原因,一共十处.分可能有点少,but,如果需要,等我转来分,再给你~

　　IwassohappywhenIgotaletteronmybirthdayontheMay12,2000frommymominChina.IcometotheU.S.in1992.ThatwastheeighthtimetocelebratingmybirthdayintheU.S.Mymother'sletterbroughthersomuchhappiness.Inthatlettermymomwroteaboutalotchildhoodmemories.WheninChina,mymotheralwayscelebratedmybirthdaywithasimplemeal,hopedthatIwouldgrowuptobehealth.Duringthosecelebrations,Ialsogotsomegiftfrommygrandparentsandrelatives.Beforethat,mymompassedaway,butIstillcontinuedtocelebratemybirthdaywithherletterseveryyear.

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　　IwassohappywhenIgotaletteronmybirthdayon【去掉the日期不用】May12,2000frommymominChina.Icome【came时态错】totheU.S.in1992.Thatwastheeighthtimetocelebrating【celebrate不定式】mybirthdayintheU.S.Mymother'sletterbroughther【me我快乐】somuchhappiness.Inthatlettermymomwroteaboutalot【加上of】childhoodmemories.WheninChina,mymotheralwayscelebratedmybirthdaywithasimplemeal,hoped【hoping状语】thatIwouldgrowuptobehealth【healthy】.Duringthosecelebrations,Ialsogotsomegift【gifts复数】frommygrandparentsandrelatives.Before【After之后】that,mymompassedaway,butIstillcontinuedtocelebratemybirthdaywithherletterseveryyear.