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　　短文改错!therearetoomanycarsinourtownnow.foraresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams.andtheairwhichwewillbreatheisterrible.ourtownisveryoldbutallthestreetsarequitenarrow,sothereisnoroomforbuslanes,whichmeanthatbusesalwaysgetstuckinthetrafficjams,too.however,lotsofaccidentwithcyclistsoftenhappenbecauseofcrowdedstreet.butIthinkthereisasimplesolutionofthereproblems.thegovernmentshouldclosecitycentertoalltrafficexceptbusesandbikes,andbuildverylargercarparksoutsidethetown.cardriverscantakeabusintothecitycenterandarriveatworkortheshopsrelaxingandinagoodmood.

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2020-11-1717:51

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冯小群

　　不区分首字母大小写,原文是这样的,一会儿再改错吧...

　　therearetoomanycarsinourtownnow.foraresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams.andtheairwhichwewillbreatheisterrible.ourtownisveryoldbutallthestreetsarequitenarrow,sothereisnoroomforbuslanes,whichmeanthatbusesalwaysgetstuckinthetrafficjams,too.however,lotsofaccidentwithcyclistsoftenhappenbecauseofcrowdedstreet.butIthinkthereisasimplesolutionofthereproblems.thegovernmentshouldclosecitycentertoalltrafficexceptbusesandbikes,andbuildverylargercarparksoutsidethetown.cardriverscantakeabusintothecitycenterandarriveatworkortheshopsrelaxingandinagoodmood.

　　第一行for--as

　　第二行去掉will

　　but--and

　　第三行mean--means

　　第四行accident--accidents

　　becauseof后边加the

　　第五行there-these（不一定对）

　　第六行larger--large（或者去掉very）

　　最后一句话去掉最后一个and吧