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　　【我这段英语介绍有没有错误,希望大家指出来.Hello,everybody.I'mveryhappytostandhere,letmeintroducemyself.MynameisZach,i'mtheonlychildinmyfamily.I'mgraduatefromHunantongdevocationalcollege,andmajorincomputerap】

　　我这段英语介绍有没有错误,希望大家指出来.

　　Hello,everybody.I'mveryhappytostandhere,letmeintroducemyself.MynameisZach,i'mtheonlychildinmyfamily.I'mgraduatefromHunantongdevocationalcollege,andmajorincomputerapplication.

　　Inmysparetime,Ilikelisteningtomusic,Ithinkgoodmusic,Letmehaveagoodmoodtodoanything.Inadditiontomusic,Ialsolikeplayingcomputergames.ManyChinesepeoplethinkplaycomputergameshinderedpeoplestudy.ButIthinkcomputergamescouldmotivatemetolearnEnglish.

　　IreallylikeEnglishverymuch,It'shardbutIloveit,Why?becauseIbelievethatviaownefforts,beabletospeakfluentEnglish.

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　　Hello,everybody.I'mveryhappytostandhere.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisZach,I'mtheonlychildinmyfamily.IhavegraduatedfromHunanTongdeVocationalCollege.Andmymajoriscomputerapplication.

　　Inmysparetime,Ilikelisteningtomusic,Ithinkgoodmusiccanhelpmehaveagoodmoodtodothings.Inadditiontomusic,Ilikeplayingcomputergames.Manypeoplethinkplayingcomputergameshinderspeoplefromtheirworkandstudy.ButIthinkcomputergamescanmotivatemetolearnEnglish.

　　IlikeEnglishverymuch.It'shard,butIloveit,becauseIbelievethatIwillbeabletospeakfluentEnglishthroughmyownefforts.