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　　帮我改一片英语短文ihaveagoodfriend,hernameisLinYue.sheis13yearsold.shestudiesinBeiHuanMiddleschool.shelikesmathandchinese,andhershchoolreportalwaysverywell.herhobbyisreading,playingpianoandmakingcake.sheisve

　　帮我改一片英语短文

　　ihaveagoodfriend,hernameisLinYue.sheis13yearsold.shestudiesinBeiHuanMiddleschool.shelikesmathandchinese,andhershchoolreportalwaysverywell.herhobbyisreading,playingpianoandmakingcake.sheisveryfriendlyandhelpful,thoughsheisn'tbeautiful.buteveryonethoughtsheisverylovely

　　whatisagoodgirl!ilovesheforever!

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2020-11-1321:50

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　　Ihaveagoodfriend,hernameisLinYue.Sheis13yearsold.ShestudiesinBeiHuanMiddleschool.ShelikesMathandChinese,andhershchoolreportalwaysverygood.Herhobbiesarereading,playingthepianoandmakingcakes.Sheisveryfriendlyandhelpful,thoughsheisn'tbeautiful.Buteveryonethoughtsheisverylovely!

　　Whatisagoodgirl!Iloveherforever!

　　1.be动词后面加形容词就可以了.

　　2.动词后面的人称要用宾格.

　　3.hobby后面的爱好有几个,所以be动词换成are,hobby改为hobbies.

　　4.弹奏乐器,中间要加定冠词the.

　　5.句首字母大写.

　　6.makecakes的“蛋糕”是直接加在动词的后面,所以要加s

　　应该就是这些了