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  帮忙修改下英语作文,内容也好,语法也好,标点符号什么都好,有什么槽尽管吐吧……WhenIwenttoseniorhighschool,IthoughtImetthelargestprobleminmylife.TherearefewpeopleIknew,andtheworsewastheheavysc

  帮忙修改下英语作文,内容也好,语法也好,标点符号什么都好,有什么槽尽管吐吧……

  WhenIwenttoseniorhighschool,IthoughtImetthelargestprobleminmylife.

  TherearefewpeopleIknew,andtheworsewastheheavyschoolwork.Halfatermlater,IfoundmyselfintheexactsamespotasIwasbefore.Inalongtime,Iaskmyself“Whatareyoudoing?”Buttherewasn’tanyclue.Itseemedthateverythinghadlosthope.Ifeltlonelyandisolated.

  Luckily,myfamilyfoundtheseintime.Theyadvisedmetofindmyownrhythm.ItcalmedmedownandIbegantoconsidermylifecarefully.

  Andthen,thingsbegantofallintoplace.IthoughtIwasjustlikeabutterflytrappedinitscocoon,waitingtoemerge.

  Maybemyrhythmisveryslowly,butIdecidetoenjoyitwithallmyenergy.

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2020-11-0815:35
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蒋齐密

  有了senior就可以不用high了,IfoundmyselfwasintheexactsamespotwhereIwasbefore,

  clue换成respond我觉得比较好诶hadlost用的怪怪的,改成lost吧.myfamilyfoundtheproblem比较好considermylife改一下吧.slowly是副词,用在这不对哦,应该是slow

2020-11-08 15:36:56
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