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  【帮忙修改一下英语自我简介,主要是语法错误,小升初用的Hello.Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisXXX.PresentlyattendingXXX.i’mXXyearsold.Iamveryfondofhistory.Ihavebroadinte】

  帮忙修改一下英语自我简介,主要是语法错误,小升初用的

  Hello.Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisXXX.PresentlyattendingXXX.i’mXXyearsold.

  Iamveryfondofhistory.Ihavebroadintereststofillmysparetimelikemanyotheryoungers.Ilovereadingbooks,especiallythoseabouthistoryofChina.Ilikehistorybestinallofmyhobbys.Inaddition,Ienjoystudyscienceandgoswimmingwhichenrichmymindandstrengthenmybody.

  Ialwaysbelievethat"Dowhatyoucanwithwhatyouhave,whereyouare."Onewilleasilylagbehindunlesshekeepsonstriving,thatiswhatstronglysupportsmethroughthosetroublesthatnearlydragmedown.

  Withallmyenthusiasm,passion,energyandaspiration,I’mdreamtobeahistorianthatknowallabouthistoryandhelppeopletodiscovertheunsolvedriddleinthehistorical.

  Thankyouforyourattention.

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2020-11-0219:06
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  第二段“abroad”改为“wild”,“youngers”改为“youngs”“abouthistoryofchina”history前面加“the”hobby复数y变ie加senjoydoingsth.

  最后一段Iamdream后面应为ofdoingsth.helpsb,dosth.

2020-11-02 19:08:07
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