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　　求修改英语作文AsIgrowup,IrealizedthatthereisawalwhichIcan'tseebetweenmeandmyparents.WecalledthewallGenerationGap.IstillrememberwhenIwasalittleboyIhavetoomuchtotalktomyparents.Howeverdaysornights,eatin

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　　AsIgrowup,IrealizedthatthereisawalwhichIcan'tseebetweenmeandmyparents.WecalledthewallGenerationGap.

　　IstillrememberwhenIwasalittleboyIhavetoomuchtotalktomyparents.Howeverdaysornights,eatingorwatching.ButwhenIstayathomewithmyparents,Ifeelembarrssed.BecauseIhavenowordstosay.SoIhavetopretendtobewatchingTVorreadingbookstoletthemknowIwasbusysothatIhavenotimetochattingwiththem.

　　Iamconfused,Iwanttobemyparents'friend,tellthemmythoughts.ButwhenIwanttosayit,Idon'tthinktheycanunderstandmeandsupportmyviews.

　　Tosolvetheseproblems.IaskmyChinsesteacherforahelp.Heisanoldmanandkindtoeveryone.Hetoldmetohaveatry.Tomysurprise,myparentskonwtoomuchaboutmuthoughtsandgivemesonegoodadvice.

　　TheGenerationGapbetweenIandmyparentsisawallthatmakeofpaper.

　　逻辑,单词,语法,语句什么的.

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　　AsIgrowup,Irealizedthatthereisawal(wall)whichIcan'tseebetweenmeandmyparents.Wecalled（call）thewallGenerationGap(两个G,小写即可).

　　IstillrememberwhenIwasalittleboyIhavetoomuchtotalktomyparents.Howeverdaysornights（前面直接接逗号,nomatterindaytimesoratnights）,eatingorwatching（这个watching我不是很明白,watchingTV?还是reading?）.ButwhenI（am）stay（staying）athomewithmyparents,Ifeelembarrssed.BecauseIhavenowordstosay.SoIhavetopretendtobewatchingTVorreadingbookstoletthemknowIwas(am)busysothatIhavenotimetochatting(chat)withthem.

　　Iamconfused,Iwanttobemyparents'friend,(to)tellthemmythoughts.ButwhenIwanttosayit(改为something比较好),Idon'tthinktheycanunderstandmeandsupportmyviews（改为ideas）.

　　（Inorder）Tosolvetheseproblems.（句号改逗号）Iask(asked)myChinsesteacherfora(a去掉)help.Heisanoldmanand（heis）kindtoeveryone.Hetoldmetohaveatry.Tomysurprise,myparentskonw(know)toomuchaboutmu(my)thoughtsandgivemesone(some)goodadvice(加s).

　　TheGenerationGap(小写)betweenIandmyparentsisawallthatmake（made）ofpaper.