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  呵呵,现写的应付考试.帮忙改一改哈ThepersonthatiadmireIfyouaskmewhoisthebestpersonintheworld,Ican`tansweryou.But,ifyouaskmewhoisthebestpersonthatIadmireinmyheart.Icanansweryouinaloudlyvoice.Itiswan

  呵呵,现写的应付考试.帮忙改一改哈

  Thepersonthatiadmire

  Ifyouaskmewhoisthebestpersoninthe

  world,Ican`tansweryou.But,ifyouaskmewhoisthebestpersonthatI

  admireinmyheart.Icanansweryouinaloudlyvoice.Itiswanghao-atable

  tennisathlete.

  WangHaohasabraveheartandhehasthe

  never-give-upattitude.HewonallofthechampionshipexcepttheOlympic

  Games.WhenhejoinedtheOlympicGamesin2004,hewasbeatenby

  Liuchengmin.WhenhejoinedtheOlympicGamesin2008,hewasbeatenbyMalin.When

  hejoinedtheOlympicGamesin2012,hewasbeatenbyZhnagjike.Thougheveryone

  isdisappointed,hedoesn`tfeelsadandwanttobebetter.

  Itisworthforusto

  studyitsnever-give-upattitude.Hisstorymadememoving.Ithinkhewilldothebestathleteintheworldandineveryone`sheart!

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2020-10-3123:26
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  loudly改成loudloudly是副词,不能修饰名词.只能用loud这个形容词来修饰voice.中间那部分,其实都没有错误,说法这样说也可以,所以不用改.最后三句Itisworthforustostudyitsnever-give-upattitude.worth...

2020-10-31 23:27:32
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