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　　【求专业高手帮检查下这篇文章的英语语法和错误,Thesoundofregularvibrationswhichtoexpresspeople`sthoughts,feelingsandlifeistheartofmusic.Luckly,musicisalsomymajorinuniversity.Musicincludetwoparts,Vocalandin】

　　求专业高手帮检查下这篇文章的英语语法和错误,

　　Thesoundofregularvibrationswhichtoexpresspeople`sthoughts,feelingsandlifeistheartofmusic.Luckly,musicisalsomymajorinuniversity.Musicincludetwoparts,Vocalandinstrumental.Incontrast,musicisthemostabstractinalltypesofart.

　　TheSpreadofMusicisnotbypreachway.Italsobyinfluenceandinfectiontochangethehumanmindsubtly.Sothatmoreandmorepeoplegetthenutritionfrombeautifulsound.Musiccanbeclassifiedascategoryofdifferentangles

　　1,ingeneralmusiccanbedividedintovocalmusic,instrumentalmusicanddramamusic(includingoperamusic,dancemusic,dramamusic,etc.).

　　2,makingmusicandfolkmusic.

　　3,classicalmusicandmodernmusic.

　　Mycourseisvocal,itcanbedividedbysingmethodinto:belcanto,popsinging,folksinging,originalsinging.AlthoughIalwaysstudybelcanto,Ipreferthefreestyleofmusic.Suchas:Pop,soul,rhythmblues,jazz,etc.Classicalmusicisalsoverygood,butitabitdistantfromourlives.Ofcourse,astheChinesepeople,folkmusicisflowinginourbloodandsoulwhichwe'llneverdiscarded.Manythingswillbebetrayedinourlife,butthemusicwillnot.Evenifallthepeoplearoundtheworldturnedbackwards,butmusicstillwhisperingwithus.Nomatterhowfaryouhavemovedforward,theclassicalnoteswillstillclosetoyourmindforever.Thewayoflifeisnotsmooth,roughandunpleasantwillalsoappearsinyoureyes,butIwouldnotworriedwiththemusic.Maybeyoucannotunderstandthisstateofmymindsometimes,butIthinkyoucandoitafterwentintothebeautifulsound.Goodmusiccancultivatepeople'ssentiments,relaxthetensemood,affecthislifeandwork......oreventhewholelifeofpeople.Musicisindispensabletomylifeandanessentialspiritualsustenanceforme.

　　Mymaster'sdegreeishistory.Itisanobjectivefactwhichdocumentedandexplainedtheprocessasaseriesofhistoricaleventsofhumanactivity.Theoldsays"LearningHistoriesmakemenwise".:Firstofall,Ithinklearninghistorycanbeclearlypatriotic.Second,learninghistorycanknowmanythingsclearlyandbecomeasensibleperson.Theimportanceoflearninghistoryarewellknownandobvious.Here,Icannotspeakoutmore,soIhavetodigthem

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　　Thesoundofregularvibrationswhichtoexpresspeople`sthoughts,feelingsandlifeistheartofmusic.Luckily,musicisalsomymajorinuniversity.Musicincludestwoparts,Vocalandinstrumental.Incontrast,musicisthemostabstractinalltypesofart.

　　TheSpreadofMusicisnotbypreachedway.Itisalsobyinfluenceandinfectiontochangethehumanmindsubtly.Therefore,moreindividualsobtainnutritionfrombeautifulsound.Musiccanbeclassifiedascategoryofdifferentangles

　　1.Ingeneralmusiccanbedividedintovocalmusic,instrumentalmusicanddramamusic(includingoperamusic,dancemusic,dramamusic,etc.).

　　2.Makingmusicandfolkmusic.

　　3.Classicalmusicandmodernmusic.

　　Mycourseisvocal;itcanbedividedbysingmethodsinto:belcanto,popsinging,folksinging,andoriginalsinging.AlthoughIalwaysstudybelcanto,Ipreferfreestyle,suchasPop,soul,rhythmblues,jazz,andetc.Classicalmusicisalsobrilliant,butit’sdistantfromourlives.Ofcourse,asaChinese,folkmusicisflowinginmybloodandsoulwhichwe'llneverdiscard.Manythingswillbealteredinourlife,butthemusicwillnot.Evenifeveryoneintheworldchanges,musicisstillwhisperingwithus.Nomatterhowfaryouhavemovedforward,theclassicalnoteswillstillclosetoyourmindforever.Lifeisnotsmooth,butroughandunpleasant;thoughIwouldnotworrywiththemusic.Maybeyoucannotunderstandthisstateofmymindsometimes,butIthinkyoucandoitafterwentintothebeautifulsound.Goodmusiccancultivatepeople'ssentiments,relaxthetensemood,affecthislifeandwork......oreventhewholelifeofpeople.Musicisindispensabletomylifeandanessentialspiritualsustenanceforme.

　　Mymaster'sdegreeishistory.Itisanobjectivefactwhichdocumentedandexplainedtheprocessasaseriesofhistoricaleventsofhumanactivity.Theoldsays“LearningHistoriesmakemenwise":Firstofall,Ithinklearninghistorycanbeclearlypatriotic.Second,learninghistorycanknowmanythingsclearlyandbecomeasensibleperson.Theimportanceoflearninghistoryiswellknownandobvious.Here,Icannotspeakoutmore,soIhavetodigthemorediscoveredinthefuture.However,whethercelebritiesorordinarypeople,thereisnodoubtthatlearninghistoryisgoodforlifetime.Asan"elderstudent”approaching30,itissatisfyingtometobeabletocontinuestudy.EitherthemusicmajororhistorymajorI’mcurrentlyin,Ican`tdoaverythoroughstudy,onlyalittle.Butcontinuetolearnandcontinuetolistentotheteachingsoftheuniversityteachers,whichitselfhasbeenagreathappiness."Liveandlearn"-learningthedifferentcategoriesofknowledgeinthewholejourneyoflife,untiltheendoflife,thisismyidealsandaspirations.Ihopeallofyoucouldhavesuchfeelings.That`sall,thankyou!

　　我看了下.中间有点蒙,但是大概意思表达出来了.句子结构,和句型多样化需要加强.