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  目前本人高中留学中,英语基础很差,被英语老师逼着每周写一篇短文给他,文章如下:Nowitisgettingwarmer.Isawflowersbloom,andIthinkofTagore’spoem—Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautu

  目前本人高中留学中,英语基础很差,被英语老师逼着每周写一篇短文给他,文章如下:

  Nowitisgettingwarmer.Isawflowersbloom,andIthinkofTagore’spoem—Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautumnleaves.

  ThisshortpoemisthereasonwhyIdecidedtoreadthestraybird.IhavealreadyforgottenwhenIheardit,butthefeelingatthatmomentisstillsoclear—stunning.Howstrong!Wecannotchoosewhatweare.Then,justbloom—showthebeauty,andthatistheonlymeaningoflife.Summerflowers,theylivetobloom,livetobebeautiful.Theybloomforthewholesummer.Then,theyreceivetheirdeath,soquick,soquiet.Likefirework,fireinonemoment,thenfallingbackintodarkness,buttheglaringbeautycontains.Lifeissoshort,andweneverknowwhenitwillend.Letlifebelikebeautifulsummerflowers,andwhendeathcomes,wecanreceiveitwithoutregret—whatelsedoweneed?Wehavebloomed.

  我知道可能逻辑有些问题,但是写成这样我已经尽力了.就这样,

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2020-10-2205:06
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  整片短文写得非常美,而且里面有你对人生与死亡的一些思考,只有第二段有一些小错误,稍微改一下就行,你的水平很高呢,要对自己有信心!IhavealreadyforgottenwhenIheardit.heard后面加of,是听说不是听见Summerf...

2020-10-22 05:10:49
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